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Alone again her love has left me,
crying in the darknes i no longer see.
Feeling regret i cannot compare,
my heart i should not have shared.

An ode to pain and all despair,
living and loving life is not fair.
Onto my knees I look to the sky,
when i was with her i felt i could fly.

Pain now suffocates all that i feel,
deep is the wound it will never heal.
Drowning myself in this black missery,
threw these rymes her heart we will see.

I touch the lives and all who will care,
to them the story of my feelings i share.
The story of a romantic heart felt kiss,
showing all of them an ultimate bliss.
©2007-2009 ~justjackel
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This is the begining of the pain

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i really like this poem n im sorry if ur girl left u *sigh* at least u knew what it was like to fly w/ her lol better to have loved once than to have never loved lol an old cliche

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I think and I think,
but im lost in abyss
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thank you, she left me long ago, never able to heal from this i live life alone. the saying seems to be more poetic justice lol
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You sir, are very very Korny-

YOU KNOW just as well as I KNOW

That as long as you have a bean and beef burrito,

Life will be more perfect then any other dweebs-

:D Yah. you know i'm POSITIVELY CORRECT! ;)

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